D#12HW#2&3

In my second draft I found spelling mistakes and some problems with sentence structure. I also revised my opening and conclusion sections. Additionally I found problems with my cited works which did not match.

My outline resulted in basically the first draft I did for this project. This made me realize that I had stayed on track and was focused in my writing.

In my third draft, I found a few more cited works errors and a few more sentence structure errors. I was pleased to find that after crossing out my evidence, I had as much of my own material as evidence and it still contained my argument and reasoning as well as y analysis and evaluation of my evidence.